Words to use less often

WORDS TO USE LESS OFTEN

SAT ESSAY WRITING TRICK #9

The next set of words are acceptable for formal writing, but you should use these words as little as possible and certainly don't overuse them. Do use the substitutes indicated.

#6 AND: This is a fine word that you will use constantly. For this reason, you should have a supply of alternatives ready to use so that your writing does not become boring:

A. 'And' can mean 'also', 'as well', 'in addition', 'besides', 'moreover', 'additionally', 'furthermore', as in the following sentences:

Acceptable: "And the teacher explained why the word 'and' when written over and over again can be boring."

Better: "Furthermore, the teacher explained why the word 'and' when written over and over again can be boring."

Acceptable: "And there is a way to study better, the teacher said, by taking notes in addition to reading."

Better: "Moreover, there is a way to study better, the teacher said, by taking notes in addition to reading."

Acceptable: "And the teacher said that students should always re-read any sentences or paragraphs that are not immediately understood."

Better: "In addition, the teacher said that students should always re-read any sentences or paragraphs that are not immediately understood."

Please note:

Do not use the slang word 'plus' to mean 'and'.

Use 'plus' only when discussing addition, as in the sentence:

"Two plus two is four."

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